Revised script

Scene 1: opening scene (shot 1.1), exterior of restaurant, daylight
Costume: high heels, long skirt, blouse, maybe full collared dress
LAUREN enters scene on scooter from right of screen, parks scooter, steps off scooter, faces scooter and takes off helmet. (shot 1.2) turns toward door, walks in (possible shot 1.3)
(shot 1.4) restaurant interior
LAUREN walks in front of camera and walks towards back while grabbing apron and putting it on

Scene 2: LAUREN house interior (shot 2.1)
Costume: heels, pajamas of some kind, red lipstick
LAUREN: walks into room, smoking cigarette, puts a record on, grabs photo on table/mantle, sits down in front of record player
(shots 2.2, 2.3, 2.4)
loud noise, LAUREN looks up, stands up, hesitates, walks to kitchen
(sequence 2.5) music starts LAUREN enters kitchen, whispers to scooter “kandy kane”, runs finger along it, sits on scooter, loud noise again,
(shot 2.6) LAUREN turns head, says “What are those weird neighbors doing?” wipe transition


Scene 3: robber’s house interior (shot 3.1)
Costume: regular clothes, messy hair
glass breaking sound, SALLY yelling while throwing glass bottle across room “we could have had all that money! But you had to go fuck it up!”
(shot 3.2) MEAGAN against wall yelling “Those redneck pencil dicks…” glass breaks on wall
(shot 3.3) SALLY reaches for another bottle, MEAGAN appears in front of her, grabbing the bottle, both still yelling
(shot 3.4) MEAGAN grabs bottle, SALLY subsides, lights cigarette, walks to window
(shot 3.5) MEAGAN says “we gotta make sure nothing goes wrong tomorrow so we can get outta here.”
(shot 3.4) SALLY mumbles “well, I didn’t fuck it up today”
(shot 3.5) MEAGAN gathers things together on floor
(shot 3.4) SALLY pulls down blinds, looks out
(shot 3.6) exterior shot of street block, neighbors exist car and walk into house
(shot 3.4) SALLY “Them are some mysterious neighbors”
(shot 3.5) MEAGAN “come on, help me out
(shot 3.4) SALLY throws cigarette butt, walks towards camera

Scene 4: (4.1 music sequence) interior and exterior of counterfeiters house
Costume: heels, Kassey wears chaps, cowboy hat, bra, Alex wears weird costume w/ feathers
hand unlocking door, ALEX walks through door, drops coat on floor, KASSEY puts blinds down
(shot 4.2) interior bedroom, ALEX and KASSEY lie on floor, KASSEY “we have an appointment for pick-up tomorrow” ALEX while getting up “I better make sure the machine printed the last batch” (shot 4.3) walks towards basement steps, walks down
(shot 4.4) basement, ALEX enters from left, walks to right secret room, walks out to dryer yelling up “5 grand printed”, opens dryer door and pulls money down into hamper

Scene 5: interior restaurant (shot 5.1)
Costume: Lauren- work clothes, Kassey- long coat, heels, Alex- tights, short jacket, Sally- scarf around hair, glasses, nice blouse, heels, MEAGAN-suspenders, wife beater, mask
LAUREN resting head on fist in back, someone yells “ey! Get ya butt out here!”
(shot 5.2) SALLY and MEAGAN sitting at booth in corner, KASSEY and ALEX sit in other booth
(shot 5.3) LAUREN walks up to KASSEY and ALEX, LAUREN “what can I get yall to drink”
(shot 5.3) MEAGAN and SALLY get up, masks on, MEAGAN holds gun up “Alright!”, SALLY has bag, walks towards register
(shot 5.4) MEAGAN walks up to ALEX, KASSEY, LAUREN, MEAGAN pushes LAUREN out of way, says “what’s in this briefcase, MEAGAN grabs briefcase, sets it on table, opens it,
(shot 5.5) MEAGAN smiles, yells to SALLY, MEAGAN “this’ll be enough huh?” SALLY enters shot
(shot 5.6) MEAGAN closes briefcase, and her a SALLY walk to door, MEAGAN tips hat says “it’s been a pleasure,” SALLY turns to inside says “thanks!” and runs out
(shot 5.7) KASSEY and ALEX look at each other, KASSEY wipes mouth with napkin and gets up, walks of screen left, ALEX gets up, takes sip of drink then sets on table, walks towards camera
(shot 5.8) KASSEY walks out door, ALEX follows
(shot 5.9) LAUREN, leaning up against wall, takes off apron, walks towards door, throws apron into kitchen, says “I’m taking the rest the day off,” walks out door

Scene 6.1: alternating interior shots of characters in cars
(shot 6.1) top down, MEAGAN is driving, SALLY in passenger seat
(shot 6.2) SALLY holding briefcase, throwing money up, takes one bill and holds it up to sky, facial expression changes, SALLY says “this is fake!”
(shot 6.3) MEAGAN looks over, looks back at road, looks over again, takes bill, holds it up to sky, says “What the-”

Scene 6.2: car interior
(shot 6.4) KASSEY driving, ALEX passenger
ALEX “…fuck were those fools thinking!” KASSEY “I don’t know but now we’ll be set back all week on our deliveries. We’re fucked!”

Scene 6.3: (shot 6.5) LAUREN driving scooter, says “What the fuck!”

Final sequence: exterior of street block
(shot sequence) outside shot of car driving onto street, each vehicle parking on street, each character exiting vehicle, multiple perspective shots of lines of vision, long shot of all characters on street, black screen, end.